Mr. Chris' Trophy Card

[Kurisu-San]

well, being that I'm a HALF decent graphic artist, I took my turn at this. Lemme know what ya think. so far only ONE request and I am pretty sure that it will stay that way (I'm not THAT good.

Here is my Trophy Card:

[Welsh]

Pretty good, but it's a little cluttered.

[The_Evil_Genius]

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[beholdryanism]

i really like your card, you have skills obviously, however some constructive criticism if i may? maybe scale back the size of your txt and all the pictures, with the exception of the graffiti. give the bg a little more play and it wont look so busy, also it is a really cool bg and would like to see more of it you know? thats it, otherwise great job man.

[Kurisu-San]

Pretty good, but it's a little cluttered.

was going for cluttered I don't like these overly powerful cards where they're HUGE and you have to break your wheel mouse to get to the bottom of the page XD.

i really like your card, you have skills obviously, however some constructive criticism if i may? maybe scale back the size of your txt and all the pictures, with the exception of the graffiti. give the bg a little more play and it wont look so busy, also it is a really cool bg and would like to see more of it you know? thats it, otherwise great job man.

Thanks I'll work on it. Photoshop font is kinda limited XD

[The_Evil_Genius]

im new to this whole thing

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im was wondering how to get an update on my card, i have over 800 trophies but my car says i have nothing

[Carbon Lancer]

Maybe make the red letters darker or bold....and your name is illegible, but we know its you :p Nice card tho

[Johnny_Sparx]

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Whats uppppppppppppppppppp

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Im new to this whole thing

im new to this whole thing

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im was wondering how to get an update on my card, i have over 800 trophies but my car says i have nothing

What you just did is called "spam" and not proper on this site. I suggest you read the fourm rules and regulations before posting again and then maybe someone will take you serious and actually answer your question and help you.

On topic:
give yourself more credit. It's a great start and wit a few tweaks could be even better. If yo could do something different with all of the red lettering and with the purple name across the middle then that alone would make it better. But I think for your first one you did good

[The_Evil_Genius]

What you just did is called "spam" and not proper on this site. I suggest you read the fourm rules and regulations before posting again and then maybe someone will take you serious and actually answer your question and help you.

Yeah, My bad, but just in case you didnt know, I have to post at least three times before I can add anything to my posts.... So i was just getting those three out of the way.

Thanks for the concern, though, I'm sure people won't have many issues taking me seriously.

BTW, Kurisu-san, good card, man!! I agree its a little busy, but like everyone's said, just a few tweaks and it will be sweet ass!! GJ bud.

[jairtheshadow]

It's alright....

[Kurisu-San]

just made that for a friend on here ^^ any critiques would be welcomed ^^

[Mercinarie_Ant14]

it came out really good, i think you can change one thing, i think you should use a different font, but other then that it came out NICE!! keep up the good work

P.S. i think its a lil too long. shorten it up a lil bit, its a MAX of 550px

[Kurisu-San]

it came out really good, i think you can change one thing, i think you should use a different font, but other then that it came out NICE!! keep up the good work

well I'm not TOO fond of the font myself, but it IS a Dragon Age: Origins' based Trophy Card. Being that they used a really calligraphic writing style it seemed to fit ^^ I had to blow up the font like crazy to make it legible though lol

really? >.< Oh no lol I think I used 600...

[NeroRadec707]

Very nice work

[Kurisu-San]

Very nice work

enjoy it m8, ^^ I worked hard on it

[NeroRadec707]

That I know since you have been discussing it with me for a while. Thanks alot again and thanks for everything else you are planning. Best of luck.

[Jukez18]

good trophy card

[Altered Formula]

Love that Dragon age Trophy Card, Impressive piece of work Mr Chris.